Lasting Twins (NeonKass and I))

I smiled and watched her eat when we pulled in the driveway.

I finished it exept the crust and put it back in the box and drank some water. "Yum." I smiled feeling full.

I smiled, and got us then inside, "You don't eat the crust?! its the best part!" i said and ate it as i the ngrabbed another peice

"I usually do. But i wasnt in the mood for it." I said sticking my tougne out at him and stretching.

I smileda nd kissed her

I smiled and kissed him back.

I smiled and picked her up and laid on the cough with her

I wrapped my arms around his neck just enjoying the feeling of being around him. I kissed his cheek.

I smiled and held her, and laid my head against her cheek

I smiled and closed my eyes.

I smeild nad laid holding her

I kissed his neck softly nuzzling it.

I smiled and held her

I kept kissing his neck softly.

I smiled and after a while moaned sfotly

I smiled on his skin and kissed up his neck to his lips.

(im Halfway through your story.. I think.)

((doing chapters or just reading?))

I smiled and kised her


((and i will be done later on this week, no school wed. thrus or fri for thanksgiving USA))

((got a half our))

(reading. So when I go over it i know what would be a good ending for a chapter. And i must tell you that your story is one of the best I have EVER read))

I kissed him back pressing close to him.

(same here)

((thanks and it means alot that you like it. dont' mean to sound...mean but its why i kind of nyo like knowing you, because if i did you might be a little biased in reading it saying yuo liked it to not hurt my feelings))


I kissed back and held her close ot me

(even if i really knew you I would e said tue truth. Im not biased with my friends. I think my friends are with me and thats why Im not. You have a real talent and dont think other wise. And I know if I get other people to read it they'll agree))

I smiled on his lips and niblled on them.

((i understand and i see. and tahts realy nice of you to say. you can let people read it, as long as they dont' steal ideas or anything))

I smiled and nippedh er lips softyl

((gotta go in 15 mins))

(i will then and they wouldnt. They know I'd hate em. I dont tell people a lot when I write caise then they ask why i dont have a life and all))

I moaned softly and brushed my lips on his jaw.

((teah....and i don't ahve freinds that want to hand out with me so...i am on my laptop all the time...))

I smiled and kissed own her neck